Maidens Tears

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Maidens Tears


Long ago in the land of Skyloo a mother was giving birth to a baby girl. She named her “Maiden.” Maiden was a beautiful young baby soft brown hair and dark brown eyes. The mother and father were weary of keeping the child, frighten that she might grow to have more beauty than of the Goddess Lydian. Everyone in the village knew that if you have a child that grows to be prettier than that of Lydian the Goddess would punish your child.
Days, Months, and years pasted. In those years Maiden became more beautiful than that of Lydian. Mortified Maidens parents made her wear a cloth over her face and forbidden her from taking it off. Maiden did not know of the Goddess of Lydian nor did she know the reasons for her parents’ strange ways. So she did what she was told, until she met Dorian.
Dorian was Lydian’s evil twin brother; he was a very sly young man, who had heard of this beautiful lady by the name of Maiden. One day Dorian decided to go down to the village Skyloo to see Maiden. At the first sight of Dorian Maiden fell in love, hoping to marry him. Being he was a stranger to the town the only polite thing to do was to take him in. So for five years Dorian stayed with Maiden and her family. In those five years Maiden and Dorian became very attached. Then one day Dorian asked Maidens hand in marriage, Maiden accepted. The day of the wedding was set and they were to be married.
For 5 years Dorian had been acting to be in love with Maiden, for his plan was to see how beautiful she really was and for his sister to get horribly jealous. Finally his plan was about to take action after so long.
On the day of the wedding it was pouring outside making the wedding not as wonderful as Maiden had planned. Everyone in the village was there, even some of the Gods and Goddess came in disguise, to support Dorian. Dorian was in such a mess, being too tense wanting to take the cloth off of her face at the end of ...